Tuesday, November 23, 2010

Option # 5

66 comments:

  1. My Reaction was incredible! I Love black and white drawings. I think they did very good on the shading. It looks 3D! what i dislike like about it is that the candle by the basket kinda looks weird to me. I would just change the basket to something more creative.
    -Valerie Cross
    7th hour

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  2. I love this drawing. The feather is my favorite the detail in it is astonishing. The lines are neat and everything goes together well in this photo. I would love to see it in color, and I think it needs one more thing to finish it off.

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  3. First reaction: What is it?
    I like the detail and how simple it looks.
    I would add color.
    -Vanessa Aguirre (2nd Period)

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  4. My first reaction when I saw this drawing was wow. It's great.I like how there all detailed very well.I think it would have been great would be if it was in color. What I would do diffrently would be instead of a peacock feather I would put a real flower in the vase Roberto Macias 1st hour

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  5. Amy Carrillo 1st hour
    When i saw this my reaction was amazed. I love this painting i looks so real. I do not llike the candles it does not go well with the picture. My favorite part is the bsket and feather. I think it needs some more details to make the picture more encrediable.

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  6. 1. My first reaction was it looks like a decoration.
    2. What they did well is the 3D created by the candles.
    3. The feather can look less like a pencil.
    4. Make it look more like a feather.

    Seth Hild
    Seventh hour

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  7. My first reaction was," I don't understand how these items fit together."
    I love how in this picture there is alot of detail.
    I didn't like how i couldn't really understand where the picture was coming from.
    I would have probally colored this picture because peacock feathers look nice when they are colored.
    Rachel Duffy 8th hour

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  8. Isaiah Martinez 2nd period
    My first reaction was that it looks like something you would use for a picnic.I like how there's a lot of detail.I don't like how its has no color.I would add color to it.

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  9. This paniting is so elegent it looks like somethig a women would take for like a nice spaw day the littie peecock feather in the vasse with a basket that a women would take like chocelets of sort and in the back which looks a sented candle that would give the room a nice smell to where she or he maybe and the littie cube like candles would be something to warm up the room where someone would be in a mud bath

    Daniel Ramos,1st Period

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  10. My first reaction was "wow this is really good!"
    I like it looks real.
    I dont dislike anything about the picture honestly.
    I probaly would add color to it to make it stand out.
    Kristin Dunkin 7th hour

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  11. my first reaction was amazed.I like how they went into detail.What i dont like is that there is not any color.What i would change about this is that i wold add color.

    7th hour

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  12. my first reaction to this was "this is a good drawing." I like how it has its shadow & its value on everything. The thing I dislike is how it has no color. 8th hour

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  13. Austin Stewart 8th period
    My first reaction it it looks pretty cool
    What i like about it is it looks like something my dad drew
    it doesn't have enough color
    I would do nothing differently

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  14. my 1st reaction was what was it. i like how unique it is. i wouldn't change anything. i wouldn't do anything different.7th hour

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  15. I like this picture because of it light colors. This is a mysterious picture. Because of the mystrey it makes this picture a fantasic.

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  16. i like the detial of the picture and how real it looks i wouldnt change anything about it by owen

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  17. Blake Phillips 7th Grade
    My first reaction was "That looks real!".
    What I liked about it was that it looked realistic and not cheap.I wouldn't change it at all.

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  18. Kane Mayes 7th grade 1st hour

    my reaction to this drawing was AWSOME !!!! they did an awsome job on the shading. they really made the picture pop out of the page. they made it look really real

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  19. Christian Adorjan
    I thought Vincent Van Gogh did it. I thought the shading was wonderful it looks easy but as I think its very hard. I think the candles could have been spaced evenly. Make the candles seperated evenly.

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  20. Noah Hernandez
    1st Period
    The things that the person did good in this picture was that it had good detail. The set up of the picture was good also. They followed the shading procedure. Very good drawing.

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  21. my first reaction was that had taking a picture of it. one thing I don't like about it is that it's not in color. If I could change one thing it would be to add color.
    Anthony Heriaud 1st hour

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  22. Anthony Heriaud
    1st period
    It looks good but I think I would adds some color to It.

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  23. My first reaction was "Are those cubes on the tray candles?..?". I really like the detail on the objects in the picture. I think the artist did a good job on the shading. What I dislike is I don't understand how all these objects go together. One thing i would change is putting different objects together that make more sense.

    Arianna Weeks
    7th period

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  24. my first reaction was its a little dull but is very detailed. i like all the detail in it, but it needs some color. i would add color to it.
    Ashley Martinez 1st period

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  25. My first reaction was, that I really like the shading! I like how they filled in all the shadows, and added value really well. The thing I dislike about this picture is that it isn't colored. That is what I would change, if I was able to change it.
    Meggy Makasiar 7th Period

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  26. My first reaction is, woah! This picture looks like it was professionally drawn!
    I really like how everything is detailed perfectly. The shadows match the objects and it just amazes me how real it looks!
    I don't dislike anything in this picture.
    The only thing I might change is to have it in color, but otherwise the picture looks great!
    -Liz Metcalf 7th hour.

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  27. My first reaction was That looks really good and neat. They really used the values well. I would make it have colorin it.And I would have make the Peacock feather an actual flower.

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  28. Raven Russell
    1st period
    This picture is good but if it had color I would really like it,it that good for right now.

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  29. the fist reaction i got was that i saw a poor family with any food in their basket. what i like about it is that it is in black and white so it makes it look better like in older time when they used baskets i would put some fruit in the picture next to the basket.

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  30. My frist reaction was that it was a really good and creative drawing. I like this because it is really nice looking and good. I don't really dislike it. I would make it have color instead of blank and white.

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  31. nick Baltazar 2nd
    My first reaction is the shadows because it looks real.
    I like it because its color is black and white and grey.
    I don't like the images .
    I would use different images.

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  32. My first reaction to this picture is that is very nice and neat.I like that it is simple.I don't think anything is wrong with it.I think it just needs more color.
    Rebecca Perez 1st period

    December 13,2011 3:20

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  33. Idalis Rodriguez 2nd
    My first reaction to this is everything looks so perfect. O like how all the lines are straight. One thing i would do differently is add some clor in it.

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  34. My first reaction to this picture was wow! What I like about this picture is how it is so detailed and looks so perfected. What I dont like about this is how its not in color. What I would do different is add some more color to it.

    Candice Leask
    7th Period

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  35. My first reaction was it was beautiful! One thing I like about it was the peacock feather and how it was in a flower holder! One thing I didn't like about it was that it was very dull. I would put color in it to change it.
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    Megan Winter
    7th grade

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  36. Marcus McKinney 2nd
    My first reaction to this picture was who was creative enough to think of something like this and make a picture about it. The things I like about the picture are how they put the candles on that little cart. Some things they did well are they filled up the whole page and put more than one thing in it. The things I dislike about this picture how the person that did this didn't put any color. The things I Would have done differently about the picture are I would have done it about sports and put color in it.

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  37. Adriana Gonzalez 8th hour
    When I saw this picture I was Amazed of how perfect it was. I like how everything is so alined and neat. I really don't dislike anything about it, but if I had to make something diffrent i'd put some color.

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  38. My straight up honest reaction: Hmmm..food!!(: ohh..wait. It's not food..
    I really like how they really captured a lot of detail in this picture. I think the basket was done very well. I dont like how they made me think the white blocks was cheese. I wouldnt do anything different but, putting some food in the basket. Other than that its pretty amazing.

    *Brittany Nunez
    *2nd period.

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  39. my first reaction to this when i first saw this i thought about a picnic i like how its gray the thing that i dont like about this picture is that there isn't much food if i were to do this differently i would see how it would look like with color
    -bella gutierrez

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  40. My first reaction to this picture when I saw it was that I taught about the pictures from the old days. What I did not like about the pictures was that I think its need a little color, because if the pictures should it have color I could tell or see more better the pictures.

    Ilianery Rodriguez

    8th period
    8th grade

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  41. My First reaction was It looks detailed
    I like how it looks fancy & nice.
    I dont like how its in black & white.
    I would make it in color.

    Oscar Delabra 2nd Period

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  42. My first reaction was i thought the candles were cheese. I liked that the artist used really good feathertipping. I dislike the no color. I would add color to half of the picture for an artist picture.
    Josh Farthing 2nd hour

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  43. first reaction was wow ,
    i liked the colors because there my favorite .
    and in my opinion i didn't dislike one thing about this picture
    but one thing id do different would to change the color of the house

    Myles Mendoza 8th period, 8th grade

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  44. My first reaction to this picture when i saw it i said who ever made this must have had steady hands and took their time to make it. What I did not like about this picture was that the basket looked like it was floating.

    Luis Garcia

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  45. My first reaction was is this a picnic. I like the shading and shadows. It almost looks like a real picture.


    Alec Tisberger
    1st hour

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  46. My first reaction to this picture was a quit evening with the family and relaxing i enjoyed look at all the shadows and feather tipping this person did
    Megan Sorg 7th period

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  47. My first reaction is sweet. No literatlly because of the perfectly cubed sugar cubes. And also the shadeing is pretty neat. Makes me feel like I could grab it off the page and go on a romantic picnic.

    -Debra Meeks
    -7th Grade
    -7th hour

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  48. My first reaction to this picture is if it was a picnic happening in the dark because there are candles everywhere. What i like about it is how it is so creative. what i don't like about it is why it is so dark, i would make it bright so it looks like an actual picnic.


    Nate Shead
    1st hour

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  49. My first reaction to this was "Thats alot of detail".
    I like all the detail this person must have tok their time on it.
    I dislike how there is no color so nothing really pops out at me.
    I would add some color.
    Tyler Bohr
    2nd Period
    8th Grade

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  50. My first reaction talk about pop art. I liked how they shade it so cool. Nothing to dis like about. I wouldnt change one thing.


    Noah mendez
    8th grade
    8th period

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  51. My first reaction: Amazing! I like how they did the shading, it all fits in perfectly. I dont dislike anything about it.

    Leslie Corral
    2nd Period
    8th Grade

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  52. My first reaction to this was best picture ever. I like how the person did the shading rather than coloring it or painting. i don't dislike anything and would not change anything.
    Ben Kubiak, 1st Hour, 7th Grade.

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  53. My first reaction to this picture was a very calm vibe. I really like the fact that the picture isn't boring but the color isn't popping but the picture is very popping. I dislike that every thing is kind of scrunched up together. If this was my picture I would of spaced everything out a little bit more and added a few more things.

    Ashontik Jones 8th hour

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  54. My first reaction was amazing!I really like the black and white it makes it look outstanding. I dilike that the basket does not have anything inside. I would add something inside the basket (fruit).

    Anna Jimenez ♥
    2nd Hour
    8th Grade..

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  55. My first reaction was that it looked sad. I thought this because it looked dull and sad. I like the 3d shapes. I dislike the way that it is grey. If this was my picture, I would make it colorful.
    Gerardo Barraza 2nd hour.

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  56. My reaction was amazed i Love this picture. I like how its black and white. I dont dislike this picture. And nothing should be change in this picture.

    keyonna flanagan 7th 1sthour

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    1. Its so good i don't even know what to say. It looks so realistic.(Like i could grab it).Don't change not one thing on that picture

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  57. When I first saw this picture i was like wow, it looks so perfectly drawn. What i like about this picture was that it was drawn good. If I had a change something it might be the colors.
    Estefani Franco
    7th hour

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  58. my first reaction is that time and effort was put into this picture. I like how its not colored but shaded. I don't dislike any thing in the picture. I would not do any thing differently.
    Noah Smith 7th period

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  59. My first reaction was it looks like they really tried to make to their values stand out. Which they do. I like how it looks 3D. I don't really like how its not colored. I wouldn't do anything differently.
    -Daisy Sanchez 1st period

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  60. My first reaction to this picture is its very vibrent it pops out it catches the human eye. It looks sad not having any emotion.

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  61. When I first saw this i was like, woah, That is drawn good!!! I like how realalistic it looks. But i dont like how there is no color to it.

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  62. It is real good. I like how tilted basket looks like a cannon. Nothing I dislike.
    Willie Velazquez 8th hour

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  63. My first reaction was that this was very well drawn.I like the shading and how it seems realistic. The thing I dislike is the lack of color.I would make it with color.
    Veronica Hankins,
    1st period

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  64. my first impression was it looked so realistic that it looked like a picture. i like how it looks real. and i liked every ting about it
    Zachary Bowne
    1st period

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  65. My first reaction was that it was very creative. I really liked the shading. I don't like the portrait itself it is boring to me. I wouldn't do any thing different.

    -Isaac Dixon 2nd

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