Wednesday, August 24, 2011

Option #12


87 comments:

  1. Keegan Harrington class 7a my first reaction was "I think it's a fish or some thing."Well I like it because it is sort of weird yet cool at the same time.I do not how ever like that you can not see or tell what type of fish it is.I would only show the type of fish it is in its face.

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  2. Joselyn Gonzalez 2nd period
    My first reaction to this drawing was the detail and texture that they used becuase at first it looked like a picture. What they did well on was the color becuase its pretty hard to make colored pencils to look like feathers. What i dont like about it is the way it doesnt show the full animal becuase it looked like a deformed bird. What i would of done differently was to at least show the face of the bird becuase then you would of known what it was.

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  3. my first reaction to this artwork was startled because it was so strange looking.I like the fact that it makes you wonder what it is. The only thing that i dont like about it is that i dont know what it is. The thing that i would do differently would be to ad brighter colors. Julian Perez class period #1.

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  4. Kira Wackerlin 8th period.
    My first reaction was that it looks kind of strange/odd. What they did well was how they made the feathers look so real. What i dont like about it is that they dont show all of the picture, only like a 3rd of it. The thing i would do differently would be to add more color and show more of the image.

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  5. Zoe Michaels 1st period

    My first reaction to this drawing is "What was the artists idea behind this drawing?". I enjoyed the blending of warm colors. I dislike the angle in wich the object appears. I would display a different angle of the object.

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  6. My first reaction was that the colors do not pop out that much. I do like the colors they have used but they could of made the bird pop out more. At first, I had no clue what this was. But then I had realized it was a bird. That's just my opinion
    Eveline Chaidez 1st Period

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  7. My first reaction to the drawing was that it looked very detailed. I liked that it almost looked like a real picture. I didn't like that it only showed a part of the bird rather that the whole thing. I would add more bright colors and show the whole bird
    Danny Wittry 2nd Period

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  8. my reaction to this picture is first i thought it was a swan or a like a duck thats what i think it is but i would add more colors to it to make it better cristian amezquita 1st period

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  9. My first reaction was surprised bacuase I know it is a bird but I do not know what its neck is resting on.I like the background color and the color of the bird.What I would do differently is to show what its neck is resting on.Maria Hernandez 7th period.

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  10. This looks like a fish swimming down in the dark sea. Its really a bird . I saw this bird in a rain forest book. It is the one that cleans the area for mating season.

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  11. Oscar Flores. Period #2

    My first reaction was this looks like a bird.
    I think the detail was well painted of the feathers.
    I do not like how it doesnt show the whole bird.
    i would've painted the whole bird on there.

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  12. my first reaction was i thought it was walruse or something. i thonk they blended the colors well. i disliked that it was dule and it looked boring.i would of used diffrent colors. Lionel Grandison period 2

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  13. my first reaction was what is that thing.it looks like a bird.i disliked how it was painted. everything.
    tyree jackson. 2nd period

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  14. Justin Losic 8th period
    my first reaction is that this painting is very dark. this painter really painted out the detail of this bird well. what i dislike is how dark the painting is. if i could do something else to this painting i would put brighter colors in.

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  15. james wagner 7th period my first impression was its a bird then a fish .

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  16. My first reaction was how peculiar, what is it. I like how it reminds me of the movie Rio. I dislike how it's hard to find out what it is. I would change how large it is, I would make it smaller.
    Lexy Bennett 8th Hour

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  17. my first reaction was i thought it was a bird.I like it because it looks weird.I don't dislike it.i would add water for the difference.richard jimenez 7th period

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  18. my first reaction to this picture was that it looks like a bird.the thing i dont like about this picture is the body of the pictured bird.oran turner 7th hour

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  19. When I first saw this i Thought of a flimingo. I like that the artist put a bird look and the look of a fish. I dont like that you cant tell that the painting is a bird or fish. I would have made it a bird.

    ~~~Isaiah Uribe 8th Hour~~~

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  20. it looks like a fish but it is not it is a bird when you look at it close. by anthony martinez 1st hour.

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  21. Christian Adorjan
    I knew right away that it was a bird not a fish. I think it is cool becuase it keeps the veiwer looking at it for a while because they might not know what it is. I think adding the beak the picture and more catching colors would be nice. Take the black out of the picture.

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  22. My first reaction was, is that s bird or an octopus? I love how they made it mysterious looking. I don't like how it looks like they couldn't decide whether or not what to draw to they made it both ideas. What I would have done differently is, I would have decided on one animal and did a more colorful background.

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  23. My first reaction was what is that? But as i looked at it I noticed that it was i think a beaver turned around. I like the way it has the lines the actual animal instead of making it all one color.i dislike the way its all black in the back round instead of a nice colorful one. I would put in a little more of the body so that it look the animal its supposed to be. Khiyana Magee period 2

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  24. Annie Shirley, 8th hour
    My first reaction was curiosity what it was.
    I like the blend of colors and the mystery of what the animal is.
    Ironically enough, I don't like not knowing exactly what it is too.
    I would change the mystery factor of the picture.

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  25. -Tayla Elliott 2nd Period
    My Reaction tp this painting is that it's a Bird. Its looks like it's sad or something. Nice colors around the eyes and the feathers.
    I dont like anything about it its very unique.
    I wouldnt change the colors up it seems to be one body color.

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  26. I really like this drawing. I wouldn't change anything on it. My first reaction was looking at two animals. I like the colors they used, they went together.
    Elijah Maisonet, 7th period

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  27. My first reaction to this picture was, "What is that?" but now looking at it more, I can tell its a bird. I like the detail on the wings. The thing I dislike about this picture, is the fact that the colors don't pop out. They seem a little bit dull. If I were to change it, I would use brighter colors, so I would look more happier.
    Meggy Makasiar 7th Period

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  28. cool
    like the different colors
    don't anderstand that it is
    make it more andrestanding



    yaritza 7th period

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  29. The reaction that i like about it is the bird from a scary book.
    the things things that i like about is the color red and black.
    What i dislike about the picture is just the bird.
    I would change the image to a super hero or a villian.

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  30. randy butler 8th
    my first reaction i got when i saw this picture the color on the bird i think red on the bird brings it out and the bird looks scary
    what i dislike about this picture is they should have shown somthing else in the picture with the bird.
    i would change nothing.

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  31. Courtney Tanner, 1st Hour.
    I Thought it was a Walrus.. But The Closer you look it looks more like a bird. they did a good job with color And detail. I Would Seperate the head from the body part . . They did a very good job. but it could be easily Mistaken for another Animal.

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  32. my first reaction was it is a fish but then it looked like a seal i like how it is hard to tell what it is JJ Crafton,1st hour

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  33. When i first saw the bird i thought of the first day of spring. They did a very good job of coloring the bird but I would of put lighter colors.
    Ryan Michaelsen, 8th hour.

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  34. I saw a bird in mid flight when i saw this and i like how the colors are well blended together. I dislike how the color make the picture dull. I would of added lighter colors like blues and green mixed in with purples and reds.
    Ashley Corral
    2nd hr.

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  35. My first reaction on seeing that picture made me think a bird right away. I liked how they made the colors blend together especally with the black. The thing that I disliked about the picture is that they used a little to much dark colors. what I would have done is that I would keep the black back round but make the picture stand out by using light colors to make the picture.
    Angel vivanco 7th hr.

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  36. When I saw this bird it was like a bending stroke. What I liked about it is that its mainly the birds body which I think is cool. I don't really like that there is a lot of red, because i gets duller when there is a lot of color. I would add more color to it.

    Shain Wade

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  37. The picture looked like a bird. The colors red,white help the picture pop out. I did not like that they didn't use the whole page for the bird I would use more color.cameron wynn 1st

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  38. My first reaction is, what part of the bird is that? I think the detail in the wings and face of the bird are done really well. I don't like how you can't see the whole thing. If I did this differently I would draw all of it and make the picture lighter so it doesn't make the bird look so evil.

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  39. My first reaction was, what the fudge..? It looks very weird..like some kind of colorful seal. I think what they did well was how they captured the color of the eye really well & how they made it all mysterious. What i dont really like is how you cant really tell what it is, and how they made the seal all dark and depressed, it looks like he's going to cry or he's in pain. If i could do this differently i would defiantly make the background some kind of yellow to make it stand out.

    Brittany Nunez, 2nd Period.

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  40. My first reaction was that I saw bird looking at me. I liked how they blended the light colors with the dark colors. The that I disliked about the picture is that it is to obvious to figure out what it is. What I would have done differently was that I would make the picture more chalinging to figure out.
    Angel Vivanco
    7th hour

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  41. My first reaction was that I really liked the texture of the art work, but why did they use dark colors? I really liked how they blended the colors together and the detail. I didnt like the color choice because it makes me think of a dull bird. I would have added brighter colors to make it look more tropical because those colors would catch my eyes.
    Emmanuel Zambrano -8th hr

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  42. This picture made me ponder on whether 'tis a bird. I thought to myself, "What the heck is that?" I didn't like that I couldn't tell what it is. I would have made it more clear on what it is. I liked the colors, bold and eye-catching.
    -Summer 2nd hour

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  43. My first reaction was that i didn't know what it was. I liked that they put stripes on it. I dislike it because i don't know what it really is. I would make the painting diffrent by making it more knowing of what it was.
    Austin Magnuson
    1st period

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  44. My first reaction was the texture was great and it looked life-like. I really liked the blending. i didn't like the choice of color because it was not really a good choice. I would add more cool colors.
    Josh Farthing 2nd hour

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  45. alex beasant
    i like wut is look like and it is a cool bird

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  46. my first thought of this picture is a couple that is depressed



    Damian nunez
    8th period
    8th grade

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  47. My first reaction to this picture that it was a flamingo trapped with its wing stuck.

    What I like about this picture that is very detailed and well drawn.

    What I dislike about this picture is that their should be more color added, and More Bright Colors on the Bird.

    What I would do differently to this picture is add more brighter and lighter colors and details into the background of this picture.

    Isabel Fernandez

    2nd hour

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  48. My first reaction to this was what great detail and texture in this art work. It reminds me of a walrus. I like how creative and neat this is. I wouldn't change much at all.

    Amanda Dominguez
    2nd hour

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  49. I like this picture because I like this animal.

    Angel curet
    1 period
    7 grade
    Repaly

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  50. When I first saw this i thought it was two birds flying in circle around each other. What i like about this art work is how the pink color looks like. What i didn't like was the black in the back it makes it to dark.

    Victor Toxqui
    8th Period
    8th grade

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  51. my first reaction is : what is that?
    i like: the colors
    i hate: that i dont know what it is
    i would paint more of the picture so is more depictable
    Maria G. 8th

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  52. My first reaction to this picture is that it looks like a bird.What i like about it is the color.What i dislike about this picture is that its hard to tell what it is and what it looks like.What i would do differently is make it visible to people and make them know what it is.



    Nate Shead
    1st hour

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  53. My first thought of this picture is was "Its a red bird" I like the colors in the picture.
    I dislike how there is only a bird in the picture there should be something more with it.
    I would add something more to the picture.
    Tyler Bohr
    2nd Period
    8th Grade

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  54. my first thought was that this picture was kinda wierd.i liked the color.The picture looked depressing.I would add more color.

    Jermaine boyd 1st

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  55. my first reaction was that it was a bird. I liked the color. I wouldn't change a thing. Nothing to dislike.


    Stephon Shackelford

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  56. my first reaction was cool a bird.i like the design and color.i don't like all the pink. Nothing to dislike.

    chris hog 1st

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  57. my first reaction was that it was strange and weird but cool i like the texture and the color of the painting

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  58. My first reaction was it was a bird, I like how it looks realistic. I think there should off been more colors in it and I would off make it pop out more.

    Brenda, 8th hour.

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  59. Decora Jones 7th hourMarch 8, 2012 at 8:23 PM

    when i first saw this picture i thought it was a bird and thats the answer i will stick with i would like it more if it had more color being the person i am but since it is sitting in that certain position i think that color is perfect for this picture and this bird

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  60. My first reaction to this painting is that is weird and/or odd. I like how it is different and it take a couple glaces to figure out what it is. I don't dislike anything about this painting, for that fact that it is odd and different from just about any other painting. I wouldn't dare change anything from this painting because I find it almost if not perfectly good.

    Isaac B.
    8th hour

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  61. my first reaction is that it is a good painting. they used a good form of 3D.

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  62. i really like the creativity of how it looks and the way it is. the thing i love most about this piece of art would be the color it goes really good with the animals.the thing i dislike most about the art is the back ground i think it should be more colorful. the only thing i would do different is the back ground maybe show that they are in the polar ice.

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  63. the thing i like about this art painting is the creativity of the art. an the colors to it real pretty and dark kinda bold looking. i don't like the back ground its needs more fizazzzzzzzzzz like make them in the polar ice. and that would be the only thing i would fix but other than that its all good.

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  64. My first reaction was that it looked realistic. they really detailed this to make it look real. I wouldnt do anything else to this drawing.

    Leslie Corral
    2nd Hour
    8th Grade

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  65. my first reaction was that it looks realistic.
    they do not make it look like they never seen a real one at all.
    but it looks for some one to give it up on and in put on there wall for a good nice home.
    that is it for a good nice drawing.




    brandon jump
    ist hour
    7th grade

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  66. It actually look like a bird.

    I like the art photo because it is red.

    I did not like the shading part.

    Not to put in the shading part.

    anthony jump 1st

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  67. My first reaction to this drawing was that the picture was mesmerizing and I couldn't look away. I love how the drawing has soft colors and blue surrounding the eye of the bird. I honestly do NOT dislike anything about this drawing. The colors speak of an untold story. I would have made the colors a little bit brighter starting at the eye and slowly fade into the colors that have been used.

    ~Nina Rodriguez 8th Period

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  68. My first reaction was it looks like a bird.I like how the picture looks so real and I do not like the background on it.
    By Tyler Scott 1st hour

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  69. I love the beauty and simplicity of the art parrot and the background.
    But i would have made the parrot a little more colorful and bright.
    Also, the parrot seems almost "blocky" in this picture.

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  70. I noticed the viewpoint of the picture, like you decide what you are looking at, that was my first reaction. I really like how well the colors are blended.I dislike the background, it didn't really pronounce the bird. What I would do differently, is I would have a different background to make the bird pop.
    -Juan Zamudio, 8th period

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  71. My first reaction is that it is the kind of picture that you figure out what it is by yourself. I like how it is sketchy looking, and I don't think I would change anything. Caleb Moody, 2nd period

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  72. jordan sewell 8th my first reaction was it was a bird but it was a close up on. but i dislike it because you can barley see the bird.

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    1. Roger Rivera 7th hour
      My first reaction was that it was suppose to be a painting of a bird zoomed in. I like how they made the feathers of the bird look very real. I don't like that it doesn't show more of his artistic ability by painting the whole bird. I would paint the full bird instead of a close up one.

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    2. Its actually pretty nice. It looks like a bird to me. Its kind of tough to tell what it is up to close.

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    3. Its pretty good. it is just tough to tell what it is. but to my opinion i think that its a bird.

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    4. When i first saw the picture i thought it was a pretty good picture.What i liked about the picture was the colors and drawing.I didn't really like the shading it was to dark.I would make the colors brighter.

      Jazmyne Morquecho
      1rst hour

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    5. The first thing I thought of when I first saw this picture is i thought of a bird that cannot fly because it is too heavy.

      The thing I like about is that it uses warm colors.

      The thing i do not like about it is that it does not show the full thing so you cant enjoy the whole thing.

      The thing i would do different is i would show the entire picture so that people can admire the whole picture.

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  73. i would have made the picture of the bird a little smaller so you could see the full body of this bird
    -Dillon Hamman
    1st hour
    7th grade

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  74. BEAUTIFUL. I love the realism and color.I like it as it is. do not change a thing!

    Jacob Boutin period 1

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  75. It is very detailed.I think its a bird. I don't really dislike anything about it.I would draw the bird a little differently.

    Edgar Guillen period 2

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  76. my first impression of this picture was i thought it looked like a chair and i like how its made out of clay what i dislike is that its too small

    Daniel salgado
    8th period

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  77. It is cool to look at. It looks like a big fish to me. I dont dislike anything about it.
    Willie Velazquez Period 8th hour

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  78. My first reaction was 'what is that'? i like the colors. i don't like that it's hard to understand what it is. i wouldn't change anything though.
    Ruby Garcia
    7th hour

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  79. brandon contrerasMay 18, 2012 at 1:53 PM

    At first a didn't know what it was .But i really liked it after a got used to it i do not dislike anything.

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  80. imy fiest reaction was cool. i like the that it haas some color. i dislike that i didnt know what it was a first.Reyna vega 7th hour

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  81. Destineefowler.

    At first when i took a glance at this painting i didnt no what it was. but i reallly liked the colors they used. it looks real.

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